2 Strategies

Hello boys and girls!

As promised, here are the powerpoint slides I have created for your picture composition. Hope this will give you a clearer picture of how you should write your compositions.

You can watch the Elmo video here :http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H5SXCuqcHN0

Besides that, here are your group writing for the introduction. You may use them to start your picture composition.

Mary’s Birthday Party

“Today is my birthday!” said Mary. Mary decided to have a birthday party. Mary sent out the invitation cards to her guests. She was excited for her birthday party.

Written by : Zhao Yi, Zhuang Ding and Yu Chen.

Mary’s Birthday Party

“Today is my birthday!” thought Mary. Mary decided to have a birthday party at her house. Mary sent out invitation cards to her guests. She was excited for her birthday party.

Written by: Yuri, Alan and Nigel

Mary’s Birthday Party

“Today I am very happy because it is my birthday!”thought Mary. Before her guests arrived, she had to decorate her house with streamers. Mary sent out invitation cards to her guests. She was excited for her birthday party.

Written by: Justin, Alicia and Adelle.

Mary’s Birthday Party

“Today is my birthday!” Mary thought of throwing a birthday party since it was her birthday. She asked her mother if she could have a party. Her mother agreed. Mary was very excited for her birthday party.

Written by: Caleb, Zi Ying and Nicole

Trista’s Birthday Party

“Today is my birthday and I want to have a birthday party,” decided Trista. She had her birthday party at her house. Trista sent out invitation cards to her guests. She was excited for her birthday party.

Written by : Isabelle and Trista

Mandy’s Birthday Party

“Today is my birthday!” thought Mandy. Mandy smiled to her mother as she talked. Her mother asked her if she would like to have a birthday party. Mandy replied with a yes. She was very excited for her birthday party. She sent out invitation cards to her friends.

Written by: Eunice, WenXi and Ming Hao

Mary’s Birthday Party

“It is my birthday!” thought Mary. Mary sent out invitation cards to her friends. Mary was excited because it was her birthday.

Written by : Elaine, Crystal and Zhi Xuan

Mary’s Birthday Party

“It is my birthday today!” thought Mary. Mar was happy because it was her birthday. She sent out invitation cards to her guests. Her guests were her friends. She was very excited for her birthday party.

Written by : Wayne, Sylvester and Sharmaine

Nurul’s Birthday

“It is my birthday today!” thought Nurul. Nurul decorated her house. She sent out invitation cards to her guests. Nurul was excited for her birthday party.

Written by Matthew, Haikal and Dale.

Kai li’s Birthday Party

“My birthday is today!” thought Kai Li. Kai Li decided to have a birthday party at her house. Kai Li sent out invitation cards to her guests. She was excited because it was her birthday party.

Written by : Kai Li, Rou Hui and Ting Wei